For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Ed

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Fever based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Family Spending on Education in China). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案                             Education Fever
    From the graph above, we can easily observe that family spending on education in China has a steady increase in the past decade, with the number reaching 983 billion in 2013, which nearly triples the number in 2004.
    Many factors contribute to the ever-increasing education spending, "letting children win at the starting line" being one of them. Many parents spend a lot of money on pre-school education. They try to send kids to the best kindergartens whose tuition fees are much higher than that of universities. Choosing better primary and middle schools also takes money. Normally, students must attend schools within the district where they live. However, many parents prefer to send their children to a better-known school in other districts regardless of the large sum of "donations". Apart from formal education, parents also pay their children for various after-school programs, from common painting or dancing classes to expensive overseas summer camps.
    There is nothing wrong with parents’ passion for education, but parents should keep in mind that spending more money doesn’t necessarily guarantee a better education for children. Money should be put where it matters most.

解析     这篇图表型作文要求考生结合图表就“教育热”展开论述。根据题目要求,文章结构可安排如下:
    第一段简要解读图表的数据,指出十年间中国家庭对教育的支出稳步增长。
    第二段论述教育支出不断增加的原因:家长想让孩子赢在起跑线上;不顾高额的赞助费送子女读名校;喜欢送子女参加各种培训班。
    第三段提出自己的建议:家长对教育支出的投入不是越多越好,钱应花在刀刃上。
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