For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How I

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How I Finance My College Education.  You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1.大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多种途径解决
    2.哪种途径适合我(说明理由)

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答案     How I Finance My College Education
    There has been a discussion recently about how to finance university tuition and fees. It is obvious that the past decade has  witnessed a steady rise in university tuition and fees. Besides, due to the high tuition and fees, students from the poor families  are likely to fail to afford it and lose the opportunity for further education. Therefore, it is high time that ways should be found to finance college education.
    First of all, the main financial support comes from parents and other family members. For all the years it is they who give the students  courage and determination to hold on. Secondly, students can borrow money from the banks, which has become convenient especially in recent years. Finally, doing part-time jobs is also a wise choice, by which the students can not only earn money, but also combine textbook knowledge with social experience.
    Personally, I would like to choose the second method to finance my college education. For one thing, I don’t want to put too much burden on my retired parents. For another, I would like to  concentrate on my studies and lay the foundations for my future career. All in all, we should choose a suitable way to finance our college education, but we must bear in mind that study is our major task.

解析     第一段开门见山提出大学费用这个话题。近年来大学费用一直增长,甚至造成了许多贫困家庭的孩子上不起大学,所以解决此问题势在必行。
    第二段阐述解决大学费用的多种途径。一是父母和亲戚资助;二是银行贷款;三是兼职赚钱。本段亮点句式较多。例如:第二句使用强调句式;第三句中which has become convenientespecially in recent years是个非限制性定语从句,which指代前面一句话;第四句是个带有非限制性定语从句的复合句,其定语从句中又使用了not only…but also…结构。
    第三段阐述个人看法,总结全文,重申主题。大学生应该寻找适合自己的方法来解决学费问题,但不应忘记学习是大学生的首要任务。本段最后一句是个表转折关系的并列句,同时强调两个方面的内容,句式完整,表达确切。
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