For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Sh

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Should We Help Others in Need? You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below:
1.现在经常有这样的现象发生:路上有人摔倒,没人敢上前帮忙。
2.这是人们的公德心缺失还是其他什么原因呢?
3.你对此有何看法?

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答案                      Should We Help Others in Need?
     (1) Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. (2) But what’ s strange nowadays is that people dare not give a hand to those in need. I would like to elaborate my views on this issue.
     (3) Firstly, I think people’ s moral sense has degraded. When egoism gains the upper hand, many people find it growingly hard to help others. (4) Secondly, there is no denying that some tragic events turn out to be traps by people with evil intentions. So common people are becoming more risk-conscious and are more wary of traps and deceits.
     (5) In general, I contend the idea that we should be warm-hearted and offer help as well as looking out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.

解析 (1)第一句话介绍背景,使用“美德”一词。
(2)第二句话为转折句,除了使用but这个表示强烈转折意味的连接词,strange一词的使用和首句形成鲜明对比。
(3)第二部分开始阐释人们公德心缺乏的原因,原因之一为自私。
(4)原因之二是外因,使用了trap,deceit等词语。采用主客观因素结合的方法,全面解释了公德心缺失的根源。
(5)最后一段表明作者立场,提出既要坚持善良之心也要有防备之心。
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