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问题     China’s State Council revised the government’s recruitment regulations to enlist college students for the army and the age limit can be extended to 24 for those with a bachelor’s degree. Some people think that it’s a good policy. What do you think?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    College Graduates Joining the Army: a Beneficial Policy
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答案     College Graduates Joining the Army: a Beneficial Policy
    It is reported that more and more graduates from Chinese universities and colleges are expected to join the army. As far as I am concerned, this policy is beneficial to both college graduates and the army’s future construction.
    For one thing, it is beneficial to college graduates, especially those who are eager to find a job in this competitive society which is deeply influenced by the economic recession. First, it is an alternative way to relieve the pressure of job-hunting due to economic downturn and extra supply of graduates. Second, the government pays for university education of those servicemen, which will save college graduates from poor families a lot of money for future use. Finally, college graduates will have more chances of getting promoted or receiving knowledge for future development.
    For another, the move to recruit more college graduates has been regarded as a way to sharpen Chinese army’s high-tech edge, which will be helpful for Chinese army to uplift the quality of servicemen so as to serve our nation better in the modern society.
    Taking the above mentioned points into consideration, we may reasonably draw a conclusion that college graduates joining the army is a beneficial policy.
解析     本题是一个给定观点型题目。写作时既可以从大学毕业生自身的角度来考虑这项政策的益处，也可以从国家军队建设方面来分析，还可以综合两者来分析此政策的益处。
    思路1：大学毕业生参军的益处。
    在大学毕业生就业难度加大的背景下，参军的益处是多方面的：如缓解就业压力；国家通过支付学生大学学费，减轻家庭经济困难学生的经济负担；另外大学生有机会在部队继续学习深造。
    思路2：大学毕业生参军对军队的益处。
    大学毕业生参军意味着军队的技术能力得到提高，在当代，一支技术能力强的军队更有利于保家卫国。
    思路3：综合思路1和思路2。
    从大学生自身及军队两方面综合考虑此项政策的益处。
    范文采用了思路3，综合论述了此项政策的益处。
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