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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Having
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Having
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Having a Boyfriend or Girlfriend on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
1. 校园里谈恋爱已经变得很普遍
2.校园里谈恋爱会引起许多问题
3.作为一名大学生,你怎么看
Having a Boyfriend or Girlfriend on Campus
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In recent years, having a boyfriend or girlfriend has become a fashion on campus, especially at colleges and universities. This fashion is thought of by most lovestruck students as a good way of developing their personality and a precious part of campus life.
While it is true that being together and in love is wonderful for young people, there are still many difficult issues to cope with. Firstly, since having a special friend is a large responsibility, it takes up a lot of time to look after the needs and interests of another person, most of which could be used for studying or playing sport. Financial situation is another factor to consider. Some activities are cheaper to do together, but most are not. For example, going to the movies or to a restaurant and buying each other more expensive gifts than necessary often cost a great deal.
As a college student, I don’t think it wrong or shameful to have a boyfriend or girlfriend an campus, and meanwhile, I have no idea of encouraging this deed. After all, study is the principal task on campus.
解析
开头段描述校园里谈恋爱已经变成很普遍的现象
中间段列举一到两个校园里谈恋爱引起的问题,例子不要超过两个
结尾段谈谈自己的建议。
用词亮点:(1) 在第一段首句中,fashion意思为“时尚”,常用于描述某种现象。相关的词还有enthusiasm, fever,craze,passion等。(2) 第二段首句中,cope with意思为“对付”,比deal with语气更重些,类似于 contend with。(3) 第一段第二句中,lovestruek意思为“坠入爱河的”,很形象,类似的词有poverty-stricken (穷困潦倒的) 。
句式亮点:(1) 第二段第二句中使用了非限定性定语从句most of which could be used for studying or playing sport,补充说明前面的a lot of time。(2) 第二段尾句中For example表示举例。此外,句中两个动名词作主语使句子富有变化。(3) 第三段首句中使用了“think+形式宾语it+宾语补足语+不定式”的结构,值得推荐。
篇章亮点:(1) 第二段首句中使用了“While it is true that…still…”的结构,意思为“虽然……是对的,仍然……”,表示对照关系,承上启下,过渡自然。(2) 第二段第三句中is another factor to consider列举另外一个原因,与第二段第二句中的Firstly相呼应。
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