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  3. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 中国

You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 中国

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问题 You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1. 中国的家长一方面苛刻的要求孩子学习各种知识
    2.另一方面，中国的家长为孩子提供无微不至的关心和服务
    3.我的观点是……
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答案                   Chinese Family Education
    Family education in China seems to be somewhat controversial in many people’s eyes:
    Some regard the Chinese family education as passive，and they think that parents impose so much on the children’s shoulders；while the others hold the view that family education in China shows its superiority in the aspect of parents’consideration，as Chinese parents are so considerate that even a trivial discomfort from their children can not escape from their notice，and they indeed take sound care of their children.
    My viewpoint goes as follows: we take it for granted that parents in China do consider too much for their children’s future，however，parents should also ponder on the children’s inner mind and psychological development，because children in the present generation are more apt to the psychological illness resulting from their parents oppression，aggression and compulsory requirements. Consequently，to provide a sound developmental environment for the children calls for the parents’new judgment about their educational methods.
解析     这是一篇典型的提纲作文，根据题干中所给的已知信息，可以判断本文是一篇关于中国家庭教育问题的议论文写作，其主要写作目的是通过分析人们对现在中国家庭教育所持有的不同观点总结并给予作者自己的意见。由于是议论文的写作，所以要求作者在书写第三段时充分展开自己的观点进行议论，切忌过于中庸，没有明确的个人意见。在设计结构上，可以根据题目中给出的提纲展开即可:
    1. 第一段阐述人们对中国家庭教育的整体评价，即中国家庭教育是颇有争议的问题。由于所有不同观点的具体描述是在第二段进行，故作者在此段只需言简意赅地点题即可，无需过多的解释。
    2. 第二段列举出人们对于现在中国教育的不同观点，需要注意的是: 如果写作者本人在第三段所给予的自己观点支持第二段中所有不同观点的一种，那么作者在此段书写这种支持观点的叙述可以相对减少，增加一些对于相反观点的描述。
    3. 第三段详细阐明作者本人对中国家庭教育的观点(parents in China do consider too much for their children’s future)，需要注意的是: 作者本人的观点要立意鲜明，切忌中庸。
    关键词: controversial，passive style，impose too much pressure on the children，considerate，psychological development，be concerned about
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