2. 职称英语
  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a classma

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a classma

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
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答案                 A Classmate Who Has Influenced Me Most in College
    Once upon a time, I was not so confident about my study and was subject to being pessimistic when confronted with frustrations. However, I found myself gradually changing as Tom, one of my classmates in college, strived to encourage me.I really appreciate his help.
    I used not to be good at English; however, whenever I was confused about the teacher’s explanation, he always interpreted it to me in an explicit way. Gradually, I found English not so difficult and made progress day by day. In addition, it was Tom who kept guiding me how to live through all kinds of setbacks and frustrations in life. I’ll never forget the very day when I failed my speech contest and was overwhelmed and ashamed. Tom told me that nobody can defeat a person if he is determined to stand up to every failure.With his encouragement, I regained confidence in learning, realizing that optimism was always the key to success.
    Thanks to Tom, I eventually learned the significance of self-confidence and optimism. They not only serve as indispensable characteristics of personality but also will benefit people all his life.
解析 一、引出主题：同学“Tom”改变了“我”(be subject to being pessimistic，strive to encourage，appreciate)
二、阐释主题
1．在他的帮助下，我发现英语没那么难(be confused about，make progress)
2．他教我如何面对挫折和失败(setbacks and frustrations)
三、升华主题
1.“Tom”让我认识到了自信和乐观的重要性(the significance of self-confidence and optimism)。
2．这种态度使人受益终身(benefit people all his life)。
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