2. 职称英语
  3. [complain (抱怨), under the pressure of... ( 在......压力之下), ever-increasing burden

[complain (抱怨), under the pressure of... ( 在......压力之下), ever-increasing burden

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问题 [complain (抱怨), under the pressure of... ( 在......压力之下), ever-increasing burden (日益加重的负担), for one thing...for another...(一方面......, 另一方面......), lighten(减轻)]
   Outline:
   1. 现在学生背上的书包越来越重;
   2. 学生负担减轻不了的原因;
   3. 结论。
                                   Children’s Schoolbags Are Getting Heavier
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答案                                             Children’s Schoolbags Are Getting Heavier
   These days we often hear our children complaining under the pressure of an ever-increasing burden off their studies. The schoolbags on their back are getting heavier and heavier, and the hours spent on their assignments longer and longer.
   Why can’t their burden be relieved in spite of social protests? For one thing, parents have a strong desire for the early intellectual achievement of their children. For another our teachers apply pressure, too. Since scores are not only the mark of success or failure for a particular student, but also, a measurement of a teacher’s performance.
   To lighten children’s accademic burden is not so easy, but is worth trying, for after all parents and teachers don’t want the heavy schoolbags to crush their children.
解析    英语写作其实是一次很复杂很考究的系统工程。如何写好英文作文主要注意以下几点要素：
   ①掌握基本语法知识，这是构建英语作文的基石；
   ②对于要表述的内容要有一个清醒的认识，即自己的看法或主张是什么，接着围绕这一主题要有个清晰的框架结构。
   ③较高的要求我们还要注意文章的体裁，适用环境等。
   例如本题要求对现今学生背上的书包越来越重这种社会现象予以分析。因此我们就得首先在文章的前段提及这是个普遍关注的社会现象，第二段就可以予以分析，即讨论这种现象的成因。最后建议家长和老师要对此予以重视。
   可以说，作为三级的作文，这样的行文结构应该说是可行的。从语言角度来看，所给定的词汇或短语已基本给出了行文的主干成分。其余的只需添加点血肉而已。
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