The Benefits of Crying Humans are the only animals who shed tears of emo

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问题     The Benefits of Crying
    Humans are the only animals who shed tears of emotion. Since they were born, crying is inevitable. It is a universal human experience that appears in every culture throughout history. Are there any physical or health benefits from crying? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    The Benefits of Crying
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
    In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

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答案     The Benefits of Crying
    In Chinese culture, crying is stigmatized and considered as a sign of weakness. That is why Chinese men are taught to suppress their feelings and not to shed tears. I, however, think that crying is very important and beneficial to us.
    Biologically, some of the toxic in our body could be discharged when we cry. According to scientific discovery, when we cry, excessive amount of chemicals and hormones is released, thus keeping our body in a stable state. If we "shut down" crying, the chemicals will accumulate within our system and pose threats to our health. Emotionally, crying helps relieve the pent-up feelings and restore a mental balance. When we feel painful, distressed and frustrated, it is natural that we have an urge to cry, as a self-healing mechanism of the body. As a matter of fact, it is reported that those who refuse to cry are feeling more desperate than those who cry. We could say that our emotion within is like a balloon, and crying is like a valve to release the pent-up stress. Without crying, the balloon would burst and lead to a complete breakdown.
    In conclusion, crying is supported by biological and emotional reasons. We should accept crying, despite the cultural stigma of weakness.

解析     本题属于“给定观点型”作文,涉及的题材是“健康生活”。该题要求考生对“哭泣的好处”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    开头:从中国文化对哭泣的看法入题,指出哭很重要,对我们有好处。
    主体:阐述原因。
    1.生物学上,当我们哭的时候,身体的一些毒素随着眼泪排出。
    2.情感上,哭有助于释放被压抑的情绪,使得精神达到一种平衡状态。
    结尾:哭是有生物学和情感理据的,我们应该正视哭泣。
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