Students are spending much time on homework every day. Look at the following

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问题     Students are spending much time on homework every day. Look at the following charts carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should cover the main extracurricular activities students take part in and the time they spend on them, the possible reasons and your suggestions.

    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案     Extracurricular Activities and the Time Spent on Them
    The bar chart and the pie chart illustrate the main extracurricular activities students commit themselves to and the time they spend on them. To be exact, students spend 93 minutes daily on doing homework, which accounts for the biggest share (39%) of their spare time. It is followed by watching TV (46 minutes) and listening to music (34 minutes), representing 19% and 14% respectively. Doing exercise (25 minutes) and using computers (30 minutes) account for a mediocre share, representing 10% and 13% , while students only spend 12 minutes (5%) on doing house chores.
    From this finding, it could be deduced that students are, on the one hand, overwhelmed by the excessive study load, which almost squeezes out their spare time that could otherwise be spent on taking exercise or helping with their family chores. On the other hand, students seem to know how to overcome or counteract the stress from study. That’s to say, they will relax themselves by watching TV, listening to music and using computer.
    To improve the existing extracurricular activities structure, schools and teachers are advised to decrease students’ study load, freeing up more time for them to promote physical health and family bonding.

解析     柱状图和饼形图反映了学生的主要课余活动及其所占的时间比例。由图可知,学生相当一部分的课余时间用于做作业和看电视。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可以安排如下:
    第一段简要描述图表。
    第二段指出造成该结构的可能原因:学生的学业负担比较大,但是他们懂得抽时间放松。
    第三段提出个人建议:学校和教师最好能减轻学生的学习负担,给他们腾出更多的时间去锻炼身体并促进家人间的亲密度。
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