The Old Age/The Youth Is Highly Valued Some cultures highly value the ol

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问题     The Old Age/The Youth Is Highly Valued
    Some cultures highly value the old age, while other cultures value the youth. Which is true in your culture? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    The Old Age/The Youth Is Highly Valued
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, you should clearly present your view.
    In the second part, you should support your opinion with appropriate details.
    In the last part, you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

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答案     The Old Age Is Highly Valued
    In Chinese culture, old age means experience and insight. Young people are taught to respect the elderly and even revere them. That is why I think the old age is highly valued in Chinese society.
    First of all, in working places, promotion is usually based on seniority. In many government positions, we could notice the hierarchy where aged people are on the top while young people are usually at the bottom. This hierarchy is always respected and few people are willing to upset it. Secondly, aged practitioners are usually seen as authorities in their own fields. For instance, many patients prefer to visit a 70-year-old Traditional-Chinese-Medicine doctor with no formal education, instead of a 35-year-old one with a PhD degree, because they think the older the doctor is, the better medicine he will prescribe. This belief is also true in selecting a surgeon. People tend to choose aged surgeon to perform operations, because they are deemed as the best in the field. Why no one worry that aged surgeon, with potential trembling hands, could mess up an operation? Because deep down in their mind, old age is more valuable.
    In conclusion, Chinese people value the old age more than the youth Even though youth means possibilities and potentials, Chinese people recognize old age more.

解析     本题属于“立场选择型”作文,涉及的题材是“文化教育”。该题要求考生对“年长者还是年轻人受到重视”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    开头:从中国文化背景人题,指出中国的社会比较重视年纪大的人。
    主体:阐述原因。
    1.在工作场合,晋升通常与年资挂钩。举公务员为例。
    2.年长的执业人士被认为是该领域的权威。举中医师和外科医生为例。
    结尾:尽管年轻意味着机会多、潜力无限,但是中国人还是服老多一些。
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