The Consequences of Teenage Smoking Despite the mountains of information

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问题     The Consequences of Teenage Smoking
    Despite the mountains of information warning us of the danger of smoking, teenager smoking is on the rise. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    The Consequences of Teenage Smoking You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state what you know about the situation. In the second part, state one or two consequences of teenage smoking. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

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答案     The Consequences of Teenage Smoking
    It is very hard to see any advertisement or promotion about cigarettes. Still, cigarettes manage to find their way to teenagers. At their tender age, teenagers might be tempted by the illusion that smoking is cool. That is mainly why more and more teenagers develop a habit of smoking.
    The major consequence of teenage smoking is the harmful impact on health. As is known to all, smoking is the major cause of lung cancer and many other respiratory diseases. Once developed, the smoking habit is addictive and hard to get rid of. This means those young smokers will have a longer smoking history than those adult smokers and are more prone to smoking-induced illnesses. In addition to this, we should be aware that the lung is a delicate organ. When it is impaired, it is hardly reversible. No magic remedy could offset the effect of Nicotine, a deadly poison to the lung.
    In conclusion, teenagers should be warned about the health hazard caused by smoking and they shall not develop the habit of smoking simply because it is "cool" or "awesome". What is really awesome is a healthy life.

解析     本题属于“给定观点型”作文。涉及的题材是“社会热点”。该题要求考生对“青少年吸烟的后果”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    开头:指出越来越多青少年吸烟的原因——容易受到香烟的诱惑,以为吸烟是很酷的行为。
    主体:阐述后果。
    1.青少年吸烟的一大恶果是对健康的摧残。重点讲述对肺部的伤害。
    2.香烟一旦上瘾就难以戒掉。
    结尾:青少年不应以为吸烟“很酷”就对香烟上瘾。
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