Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay ent

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问题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On College Students’ Interpersonal Relationship. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1. 调查显示，某大学61%的学生需要人际关系方面的心理帮助
2. 出现这种情况的主要原因
3. 我的建议

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答案　　　　　　　　　　 On College Students’ Interpersonal Relationship
①According to the figure shown in a research, about 61% college students need psychological guidance in coping with interpersonal relationship.
②Several factors can account for this phenomenon. ③For one thing, since many students from one-child families have never lived in dormitories before entering college, it’s common for them to meet difficulties in getting along with others. For another, most middle schools, giving priorities to the grasp of knowledge and high grades, have neglected the nurture of students’ sound personality and ability of communication. Besides, some parents’ improper way of education also leads to the children’s incompetence in human relations.
④Considering all these, I suggest that colleges establish a complete system of mental counseling for students, including regular speeches and courses on psychology, free professional consultations, etc. ⑤Parents are also supposed to give a hand in dealing with children’s emotional dilemma. Finally, students themselves should take an active attitude towards group life, and consciously develop harmonious relations with others.

解析 [写作点拨] ①审题及布局。这篇作文要求在说明、解释现象的基础上提出建议。在布局上，根据题中给出的三段式提纲来展开即可。首先要描述现象，即人际关系对很多大学生造成轲扰；第二段说明导致这种现象的原因，从大学生自身、学校、家长三个方面论述；第三段提出解决问题的建议。②语言。本文意在探讨大学生人际关系这—热点问题，语言应概括、清晰，注意逻辑性；根据内容需要可使用一般现在时，现在完成时。

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