For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topi

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Students’ Starting Their Own Businesses. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below.
目前有不少大学生开始创业
1.对此不少人给予了肯定
2.也有人有不同的看法
3.我认为……
                  Students’ Starting Their Own Businesses

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答案                 Students’ Starting Their Own Businesses
    (1) Many college students are now seeing (2) self-employment as the more attractive option as the job market continues to be competitive. (3) To some people, the idea of (2) being a student entrepreneur is a good one. (2) Being their own boss is a great aspiration for young people and gives them an opportunity to put their theoretical business knowledge into practice.
    (3) To other people, however, the idea of (2) starting a business as a college student may seem like a radical one. (4) To make it through the start-up phase, young entrepreneurs need plenty of initiative and drive. (4) And to run the business requires constant care and management. (4) Young entrepreneurs may have to endure a heavy workload and a lot of stress but they may not be physically and mentally up to the challenge.
    (5) As you can see, things are hard for college students these days. It’s expensive to get a degree and even you have one, there is no guarantee that it will mean anything in these job markets. (6) So, wouldn’t it be better to (2) launch your own enterprise? It can help you pay off those expensive years at college, and if it succeeds you have a job guaranteed the moment you graduate.

解析 (1)简单扼要讲述现象
(2)“自主创业”的多种表达法,富于变化
(3)前后形成对照
(4)先讲述两个原因,然后说结果,逻辑性强
(5)第二人称给人一种面对面沟通的感觉
(6)反问句增强语气
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