For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Nanny Theft

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Nanny Theft. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words, and base your essay on the chart and the outline given below:
1)下图为2010年到2012年保姆盗窃案占全部女性盗窃犯罪的比例变化情况，描述此图表；
2)出现这种变化的原因是什么；
3)如何解决这个问题。

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答案 According to the chart, we clearly learn that there has been a rapid rise in nanny theft. As early as in 2010. the percentage of nanny theft was only 6.9% among the all the theft crimes committed by women. Then in 2011. it increased to 9.3%, and by 2012, the percentage had reached to 14.8%, more than twice of that in 2010.(描述图表段)
Then why is the nanny theft rate on the rise? Firstly, it is because more and more women who are less educated and non-skilled choose to be nannies. Sometimes, the nanny thieves were not aware what they were doing even after they had broken the law. Secondly, some of the nanny thieves were born in poor families, and when they found how superior the employers’ life is to theirs, they may probably feel unfair and steal for retaliation. Thirdly, the negligence of management of the household service companies is also to be blamed. (说明原因段).
As far as I am concerned, there are some methods that can be taken to lower the nanny theft rate. For one thing, the household service company should enhance the supervision of the nannies. For another, the employers should not leave their possessions about. To conclude, it needs our mutual effort to prevent nanny theft.(阐述观点段)

解析本题属于提纲式图表命题作文。提纲第1点要求描述图表，提纲第2点要求分析图表中反映出的变化的原因，提纲第3点要求提出解决问题的办法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文，写作的重点是对图表中数据的描述和对其所反映现象原因的分析。

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