For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Proport

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Proportion of Men to Women in Executive Positions. Your essay should start with a brief description of the chart. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案     The Proportion of Men to Women in Executive Positions
    The chart shows the ratio of men to women employed in executive positions. Compared with men, women have the highest percentage (about 72%) in the lowest grade E, while the proportion in the highest grade A is the lowest (about 8%). It is obvious that women still have a long way to go before they achieve full equality with men in the workplace.
    The obvious inequality between men and women in the workplace may be mainly due to the following reasons. For one thing, women are still thought to be inferior who cannot hold managment jobs, despite the fact that women can take up almost all the professions once only occupied by men. The cases of sexual discrimination are often heard of because people think women are less efficient, competitive and tough. For another, the double burden inside and outside the home makes it impossible for women to make full use of their knowledge and talents.
    Despite the great strides women have made, the picture of women’s equality with men is not quite that rosy. The sexual discrimination is still widespread so that equality continues to be a long-term goal.

解析     第一段首先通过分析图表数据点明主题:女性要在行政职位上做到男女平等还有很长的路要走。
    第二段从两个方面分析原因:性别歧视依然存在;女性身负家庭和事业两重重担。第二句是一个相当复杂的句子。inferior后接who引导的定语从句,修饰women;despite引导介宾短语作让步状语,在这一状语结构中包含that引导的一个同位语从句,解释说明fact的内容。
    第三段总结全文,指出实现男女平等还需要长期的努力。
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