For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled To Lea

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled To Learn from Mistakes by commenting on the remark "Man errs so long as he strives". You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案     Just as Goethe said, "man errs so long as he strives", no one can avoid making mistakes. Therefore, what we need to do is to recognise and revise our mistakes.Besides,learn from them.(提出观点段)
    Many remarkable reasons account for this argument. First of all, from mistakes, we learn to be more careful. Therefore, in the process of finding mistakes, our capacity of observation is strengthened. We understand that success consists of details and we could not ignore the smallest mistakes. Furthermore, the process of finding and revising mistakes is also a process of changing our way of thinking. In many cases, when we find that we are wrong, we would try another way to carry out our plan.
    So, if there is no mistakes happening, learning would have no worth at all.(论证观点段) All mentioned above tells us that mistakes are inevitable but we can learn from them. Making mistakes is not totally a bad thing. Therefore, we should not see a "negative" mistake every time as an end product, but rather as a "positive" beginning for progress in life. (总结观点段)

解析 本篇是评论性话题作文。文章要求评论“只要一个人努力,他就会犯错误”(Man errs so long as he strives)这句话,结合文章要求的题目(To Learn from Mistakes),可知这句话在更深层次上的寓意是:要学会从错误中学习。
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