For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Vol

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Volunteer Activities. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.越来越多的大学生从事志愿者活动
    2.大学生志愿者活动的意义
    3.我的观点

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答案     On Volunteer Activities
    In recent years, there has been a growing popularity of volunteer activities. The volunteer spirit is spreading among college students. They have been actively taking part in various volunteer work, such as rescue work in earthquakes and service work in some important events.
    There is no doubt that volunteer activities are of remarkable benefit to both the society and volunteers themselves. For one thing, college students’ active participation in volunteer activities not only helps those in need but also calls on more people to join them, which influences the society in a positive way. For another, when engaging in volunteer activities, college students can also gain a lot. In this sense, it is volunteer work that enables students to learn the importance of dedication, which contributes to their all-round development.
    As a college student, I think volunteer activities should be greatly advocated. In the process of participating, we can develop our humanitarian spirit and cooperative ability, which are essential to our growth.

解析     第一段提到,随着志愿者活动的宣传和发展,越来越多的人,特别是大学生,积极投身到志愿者活动当中。末句使用现在完成进行时态,表示一直以来都在进行的动作.并暗示这一动作还将继续进行下去。
    第二段从两个方面分析志愿者活动的重要意义。一方面,大学生参与志愿者活动不但能帮助有需要的人,而且能够号召更多的人参与其中;另一方面,通过参与志愿者活动,大学生自身也能得到锻炼和提高,还能更好地理解奉献精神。第一句使用There is no doubt that句型,表达的意义是“毫无疑问……”。此外,末句不但使用了强调句型,同时还使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,是本文的一个亮点。
    第三段阐述自己的观点:大学生应该积极投身志愿者活动,奉献社会,完善自我。
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