For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of The Bridge Between People. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
    1. 世界上有许多桥,人与人之间也有一座桥。
    2. 人与人之间的桥很重要…
    3. 如何维护好这座桥

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答案      In the world there exist large numbers of bridges, such as wooden bridges, stone bridges, which are mostly built to connect two separated places. Also, there is a bridge between people, that is, the bridge for people to communicate with each other or to exchange their ideas.
    The bridge between people, though invisible, plays a very important role in our life. On the one hand, by means of communication we can know other people better, and meanwhile, let ourselves be better known. More importantly, frequent exchanges of thoughts contribute to mutual understanding and friendship. Lack of communication, on the other hand, may lead to misunderstanding and disputes, both of which are harmful to friendship among people, or even worse, to the peace of the world. So, it is really hard to imagine what our life would be like if the bridge between people collapsed.
    In order to build and maintain the bridge between people we should actively communicate with those around us, frequently participate in social activities, and fully realize the importance and necessity of bridging gaps between people. Only in this way can we live a peaceful life full of friendship and love.

解析     开头段从简述世界上有许多桥入手,引出人与人之间也有一座桥这一事实,
    中间段从正面论述人与人之间这座桥的重要性。要求有条理、有重点。
    结尾段提出如何维护好这座桥的建议,简明扼要为好。
    Also,there is a bridge between people, that is, the bridge for people to communicate with each other or to exchange their ideas。(表示追加说明,用于确切地解释某事物)
    The bridge between people, though invisible, plays a very important role in our life. (类似于if possible的无谓语动词的从句,可还原为though it is invisible)
    More importantly, frequent exchanges of thoughts contribute to mutual understanding and friendship. (评注性状语,表示进一步列举)
    So, it is really hard to imagine what our life would be like if the bridge between people collapsed. (描述某事物十分重要的句型,值得模仿)
    Only in this way can we live a peaceful life full of friendship and love. (适当利用倒装,使句型富有变化,但要注意主谓位置)
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