For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothin

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问题 For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, " Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案     Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
    There is a widespread humorous saving that "Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times." Funny as it is. the saying ironically reflects the fact that strong will is an essential quality for anyone who wants to achieve something, and it plays a vital role in our success.
    Our life involves all kinds of obstacles and setbacks which may exhaust us. Therefore, we must have a strong will to meet the challenge. What’s more, there are many temptations waiting for us when we are striving for success. For example, when we are doing our utmost to quit playing computer games, our friends just play them with great satisfaction. Then how can we resist the temptation? Obviously, only with a strong will can we overcome all temptations and realize our goals.
    All in all, success only belongs to those who can suffer years of toil and make constant efforts, just as the old popular saying goes, "Where there is a will, there is a way."

解析     第一段引出并评论名言。首句使用同位语从句引出名言。第二句使用倒装句式Funny as itis…和同位语从句the fact that…评论谚语,句式多变,为文中亮点句式。
    第二段论证坚强意志和成功的关系。本段使用了举例论证的方法,并使用过渡性短语What’smore,结构清晰。
    第三段通过短语All in all来引出对文中话题的总体评论。末句使用谚语Where there is awill,there is a way.总结全文,呼应开头。
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