For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Sh

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
    2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……

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答案     How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
    As is well known, many parents go so far as to arrange everything for their children, including their daily life, their studies and even their future. It is obvious that in modern families there is only one child. Children are always considered as the apple of parents’ eye. Additionally, though many parents love their children deeply, they don’t know how to educate them properly. So how to solve the problem is worth paying attention to.
    First of all, parents should change their thoughts. They should consciously cultivate their children, who are not always little kids, into independent persons. In addition, parents should trust their children’s ability to  cope with the things they encounter and give necessary guide only at critical moments. What’s more, financial pressure, psychological stress and even  moderate anxiety can make children more  mature when facing the difficulties.
    In fact, ways to help children to be independent are countless. It is necessary that parents know the importance of helping their children to be independent.

解析     第一段开门见山提出父母为孩子包办一切这一问题,并分析了原因:一是很多家庭只有一个孩子,孩子都是父母的掌上明珠;二是很多父母都不懂如何恰当地教育孩子。最后一句为过渡句,很自然地过渡到这一问题的解决办法。
    第二段分三点分析了解决这一问题的办法。首先,父母要改变观念,有意识地锻炼孩子的独立能力;其次,父母应该相信孩子能够独立地处理问题;第三,一定的压力能让孩子变得更成熟。本段第二句用了一个非限制性定语从句,并且巧妙地放在句子中间,将句子分隔成小短句,是个亮点。
    第三段说明帮助孩子变得独立的方法有很多,总结全文,重申主题。
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