You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The table below shows informatio

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问题 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

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答案 The table gives information about the proportion of the population who are 65 years old and over in three countries (Canada, Germany and the UK) in 1988, 2000 and an estimated percentage in 2030.
Overall, the population of elderly people is predicted to rise in all three countries from 1988 to 2030. The highest percentage of older people was in Germany, which will continue to remain the highest in 2030, while the lowest proportion can be seen in the UK over the period given.
Between 1988 and 2000, the ageing population of Canada and Germany went up by around 5% to 20.67% and 25.32% respectively. The UK, on the other hand, showed relatively little change in the proportion of its population aged 65 plus and remained at just under 15% in both years.
By 2030, it is expected that the population of people aged 65 and above will increase by approximately 5.5% in all three countries. The percentage is forecast to reach 30.42% in Germany, 26.35% in Canada and 20.35% in the UK.

解析 本题为表格数据,描述三个国家在三个不同年份65岁以上人口的比例(需注意,表格内的数据是百分比),为动态数据。表格中的1988年和2000年是过去的时间,描述时应用一般过去时;2030年是将来的时间,应用将来时态。
图表中的数据有几个较明显的特点:①三个国家的老年人口比例均在上升;②德国在任一时间老年人口的比例均最高;③三个国家2000年至2030年的上升幅度均比1988至2000年大。根据这些数据特点,行文时可以进行横行比较,按国家为线索,描述在不同年份的变化。同时适当进行纵行比较。
范文的行文思路为:首段改写题目——第二段描述总体趋势——第三段描述1988年至2000年的变化——第四段描述2000年至2030年之间的变化。
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