As more and more college students prefer to rent a room outside the campus a

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问题     As more and more college students prefer to rent a room outside the campus and enjoy their private life there, problems come along. To solve these problems, the Ministry of Education stipulates that college students are not allowed to live outside the campus. This regulation raises heated discussion among students, and even among the whole society. What is your opinion on this issue? Write an essay of about 400 words entitled:
    In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
    Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.

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答案             On College Students’ Living Off Campus
    Recently there has  been  a heated  debate  among  college students on whether they should be allowed to live off campus Some students maintain that they are adults so they should be granted the right to have their own separate rooms and enjoy privacy, while some others hold the opposite opinion As far as I am concerned, students should not be granted the right to live off campus for the following reasons.
    It’s not necessary for students to live outside the campus. Firstly, colleges provide sufficient and inexpensive dormitories for students, most of which, as far as I know, are clean and equipped with all the necessary facilities. Secondly, living on campus secures a good environment for study. The prime task of students is to study and acquire knowledge. A room on campus serves this purpose much better than one off campus. It provides college students with much more convenience to consult teachers or classmates whenever they are confronted with a problem in study. Thirdly, living in dormitories, together with their contemporaries, helps college students maintain closer relationships with classmates and enjoy friendships. On the contrary, renting houses off campus leads to less communication and emotional exchanges with other students and teachers, which will do harm to the development of students. So it’s quite unnecessary and even detrimental for students to live off campus.
    Students should be forbidden to live off campus. Firstly, on the part of colleges, since they are obligated to be liable for students’ safety, they should pay attention to the security of all the students, and thus the sensible decision to make is to ask all of them to live inside the campus for better administration. Secondly, as we all know, living off campus means everything is dependent on the landlord. This might pose a great threat to students’ safety. Therefore, for the good of students, colleges shouldn’t grant them the right to live off campus.
    All things considered,  it’s unnecessary Or even harmful for students to live off campus. Students should drop the idea of living off campus and focus on how to manage their life on campus and prepare themselves well in study for a bright future.

解析     这是一篇议论型作文,要求考生对有关大学生校外租房的问题提出自己的看法。根据题目要求,文章的结构安排如下:
    第一部分(第一段)阐明当前校外租房问题在大学生中引起了热烈的争论,并提出自己的观点:不应该给予大学生校外租房居住的权利。
    第二部分从两个方面具体阐述为什么不应该给予大学生校外租房居住的权利:
    1.没有必要到校外租房,因为学校提供了便宜且条件不错的宿舍,住宿舍有利于学习,也有利于与同学保持良好的关系,这对大学生身心发展都有好处。具体说来……
    2.不能到校外租房,原因在于:一方面学校有保障学生安全的职责,为便于管理,学校一般不允许学生到校外租房居住;另一方面,校外租房确实不安全。具体说来……
    第三部分(最后一段)总结指出校外租房不必要甚至有害,大学生应该放弃这种想法,集中精力在校园内搞好学习和生活。
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