Students have many resources on campus ,TV set is one of them. But many resou

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问题    Students have many resources on campus ,TV set is one of them. But many resources are misused or not fully used. Take TV set for example, because it is in the campus center, it has always caused congestion and wasting students’time. Write a proposal to the director of the campus on this problem.
   In the first part of your letter you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Write your composition on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.

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答案               A Proplsal for Better Use of the
           Television Set in the Campus Center
   Director, leaving the campus center yesterday for class, I found myself stuck in the daily pedestrian jam on the second - floor landing. People by the dozens had gathered on the stairway for their daily dose of "General Hospital. "Fighting my way through the mesmerized bodies, I wondered about the appropriateness of the television set’s location, and of the value of the shows aired on this set.
   Along with the recent upsurge of improvements at our school in curriculum and standards), we should be considering ways to better use the campus center television. The tube plays relentlessly, offering soap operas and game shows to the addicts who block the stairway and main landing. Granted, television for students to enjoy between classes is a fine idea, but no student needs to attend college to watch soap operas. By moving the set and improving the programs, we could eliminae the congestion and enrich the learning experience.
   The television needs a better location: out of the way of people who don’t care to watch it, and into a larger, more comfortable setting for those who do. Background noise in the present location makes the set barely audible; and the raised seating in front of the set places the viewers on exhibit to all who walk by. A far better location would be the back wall of the North Lounge, outside the Sunset Room--a large, quiet, and comfortable space. Various meetings sometimes helped in this room could be moved instead to the browsing area of the library.
   More important than the set ‘s location is the quality of its programs. Videotaped movies might be a good alternative to the shows now aired. Our audiovisual department has a rich collection of excellent movies and educational programs on tape. People could request the shows they would like to see, and a student committee could be responsible for printing show time information.
   The set might also serve as a primary learning tool by allowing communications students to create their won shows. Our school has the videotaping and sound equipment, and would need only a faculty adviser to supervise the project. Students from Script Writing, Drama, Political Science, and Journalism classes (to name a few) could combine their talents, providing shows of interest to their peers. We now have a student news program that is aired evenings on a local channel, hat many who live some distance of campus cannot receive this channel on their sets at home. Why not make the program accessible to students during the day, here on cam pus?
   With resources already in our possession, we can make a few changes that will benefit ’almost everyone. Beyond pro viding more efficient use of campus center space, these changes could really stimulate people’s minds. I urge you to al low students and faculty to vote on the questions of moving the television set and for improving its programs.
                                                      Your sincerely

解析   这是一篇以建议为形式的议论文,题目是“A Proposal for Better Use of the Television Set in the Cam pus Center,”要注意将建议写清楚,并且为什么这样建议,范文的建议观点很清楚,将电视机换一个位置,同时提高节目的质量,这样既可以消除交通拥挤,也可以让学生学点东西。然后将建议分三点详细解释。最后文章指出,应充分利用校园设施和资源,要改变现状对提高同学们有所帮助,该文章观点鲜明,全篇结构紧凑。
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