People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, o

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问题 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances.
Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: THE IMPORTANCE OF KEEPING A GOOD MOOD

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, ,state specifically what your view is.
In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案                       The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood
  Modern people are supposed to endure a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. However, not all people can manage to tide them over. There are often reports of someone going insane or someone committing suicide. Those unfortunate people are not intelligently poor. Yet they were doomed only because they suffered troubled minds or mixed feelings. From their experiences, I would argue that keeping a good mood is all too important.
  Living in a good mood under whatsoever circumstances is important in at least two ways. For one thing, it can help one foster friendly interpersonal relations. Instead of treating colleagues or classmates as rivals or opponents one will try to cooperate with them and benefit from them. One will work harder to keep paces with others or surpass them rather than complaining or get consumed by jealousy all the time. For another, a good mood can help one put disappointments and frustrations in the right perspective. Thinking that failure is the mother of success, one can well survive the temporary blows and look forward to the bright future. Both friendship and optimism derived from keeping a good mood or mentality are effective outlets for pressures whatsoever.
  Thus, we need not only to build a strong body but also keep a good mood in order to face the pressures or challenges of modern society. While most people are aware of the importance of the former, quite a proportion of people fails to recognize the significance of the latter.

解析 第1段:先引出话题(如指出当今社会人们生活在各种压力之下,一些人精神失常,一些人甚至走上自杀的不归路),再提出自己的观点(认为保持良好情绪或心态十分重要)。
第2段:给出主题句(如保持良好情绪的重要性表现在多个方面),然后具体阐述良好情绪的两大作用。
第3段:(用不同的语言表达方式)重申自己的观点,总结上面的讨论。
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