The Students’ Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival n

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问题    The Students’ Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included.
                    MY IDEA OF A UNIVERSITY ARTS FESTIVAL
   You are to write in three parts:
   In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.
   In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.
   In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 [Example A]                        My Ides of a University Arts Festival
   University arts festival has always been a big occasion to display students’ talent in art as well as to cultivate their artistic taste.Therefore,to make the incoming arts festival more fruitful,I personally think it should include two parts:one is to organize some art activities among students such as singing,painting,photography,recitation or short play contests,and the  other is to invite all kinds of art troupes to campus to stage excellent performances of ballet,orchestra or drama for our students.
   As regards why university arts festival should be organized in this way,there are mainly two reasons: to develop students’ artistic potential and to enhance their aestheric ability.By  participating in art contests,students not only have a golden opportunity to show their special  gift for art but also undergo sort of training through preparation,rehearsal and competition.  Thus those activities encourage students to get involved in art activities and help bring out the  best of them in this aspect.Professional performance groups,on the other hand,bring students  an artistic feast,which is not readily accessible to them in normal times.Such an intimate contact with real art enables students to understand art better and appreciate it properly,which will refine their artistic taste in the long run.
   Since my idea of arts festival integrates training students’ artistic ability with improving their aesthetic taste,I believe it will go a long way in art education,which is a also the ultimate aim of university arts festival.

[Example B]                        My Ides of a University Arts Festival
   I am glad to hear that the Students’ Union is planning to hold an arts festival next semester.I think it should be included two parts.One is the students’ show.The other is the famous artists’ show.
   First,the arts festival is our students’festival.We could express our spirit and creative in art through students’ paint,music and play shows,etc.It can also inspire the interest of art in many students.Students are interested in many things and can learn things fast.To have a good  habit of love and enjoy art is very important,the arts festival is a good way for students to form This habit.Second,though students are interested in arts,they have not a good ability to create arts.They can promote the ability through the famous artists’ show and lecture.This high level  arts can improve students’ ability,impress students and inspire students’ thinking.And students will know which is the real arts.
   In a word, the arts festival not only show our students’ability and creative in arts but also improve our interest and ability in arts.

解析    该作文题目与1998年的“One Way to Solve the Problem”,2000年“The Best Way to Stay Healthy”类似,都要求考生在第一段中给出自己的观点,然后在第二段中给出一至两个理由,结构上属于“说明原因”的议论文写法。但很多考生将题目误审为“举办艺术节的重要性”,或者是“如何举办艺术节”,这两种写法都属偏题,无法及格。
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