Nowadays many college students are spending a lot of time on the Internet. T

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问题     Nowadays many college students are spending a lot of time on the Internet. Their parents and teachers worry that they may live in a virtual world and isolate themselves from their friends.
   Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                   THE INTERNET WILL NOT ISOLATE US FROM ONE ANOTHER
   You are to write in three parts.
   In the first part, state what the topic actually means to you.
   In the second part, give one or two examples to illustrate your ideas.
   In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案    [1]There Is no denying that nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our daily life. More and more students are spending much time on it every day, [2]Our teachers and parents worry that the Intemet will isolate us from one another. [3]But I don’t think so.
   When we have our computer linked to the net, a new world is opening up before us. [4]I like the Internet because it is through cyber-interaction that I can keep in touch with my remote high school classmates and my parents easily and quickly. [5]What’s more, I can send lovely e-cards to them via email on some special days without spending a lot of money.
   [6]The Internet not only helps us-keep old ties but also brings us new friends. It is very common to meet a stranger when we are online. But after some talks we can get to know each other gradually. [7]We can share interests and exchange views just like intimate friends.
   As stated above, the Internet can help us keep contact with our old friends and family members and make new friends as well. [8]Instead of isolating us from one another, it serves to shorten or eliminate the distance between us and brings friends closer.
Analysis

解析    [1] There is no denying that固定句型,经常用于文章开头。
   [2] 老师和家长的担心。
   [3] But一词引出不同观点。
   [4] 此句用到了强调句it is...that...以及短语keep in touch with,另外,cyber-interaction也是亮点词汇。
   [5] What’s more表示递进。
   [6] not only...but also...经典句型,用来引出使用因特网的另一条好处。
   [7] 用形容词intimate来修饰friends,使表达生动贴切。
   [8] Instead of可以用来表示否定。
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