Are ex-prisoners the right people to teach youngsters the danger of committi

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问题     Are ex-prisoners the right people to teach youngsters the danger of committing crime? This issue has been intensely discussed for years. The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
YES
The vivid narration of released prisoners is more impressive than the traditional lectures given by professors. It does play an indispensable role in helping those immature or inexperienced youngsters reflect on their lives, strengthen their law-abiding consciousness and establish right life attitude.
It is definitely an improvement of the society to give ex-prisoners opportunities to share their experiences. There are also advantages for those ex-convicts. Because their feelings of being accepted by the public will motivate them to live positively in the future.
There is an invisible correlation between the public tolerance of ex-convicts and the social harmony and stability.
NO
It is common for people to have a fearful attitude towards criminals, especially those who have committed violent crimes, and therefore the face-to-face conversation between the young and people with a criminal record might be inappropriate in some cases.
Policemen can become the active voice in helping reduce juvenile delinquency. One of the reasons causing juvenile delinquency is teenagers’ disadvantaged family background. Parents can be the best teachers to help their children to learn the difference between right and wrong since they know their children best in the world.

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答案     Are Ex-prisoners the Right People to Teach Youngsters the Danger of Committing Crime?
    Youngsters might lose themselves or even be led astray in their formative years. Therefore, how to educate teenagers to become law-abiding citizens so as to cut down the juvenile crime rate becomes a serious social problem in many countries. Some people assert that the ex-prisoners are the appropriate ones to enhance youngsters’ legal consciousness since their experiences are more impressive and educational, while others claim that the released prisoners are not the best teachers and there exist better alternatives, such as policemen and parents.
    My personal view about this controversy is that all parties should make joint efforts to prevent teenagers from violating the law. Modern media are full of violence and sex, which trigger a high rate of juvenile delinquency. Therefore, for a start, the government should step up its censorship of mass media in order to reduce their adverse impact on the young. What’s more, schools should take measures to help students relieve stress and reduce antisocial behavior because some teenagers may drop out of school due to frustration or failure in study and then they are more likely to turn into potential lawbreakers.
    In sum, to encourage ex-convicts to talk to young people does make positive contributions to the society, but it’s definitely not the best way to prevent and reduce the number of young delinquents.

解析     本题讨论刑满释放者是否是教育儿童避免犯罪的合适人选。在具体行文方面,考生应首先简要概述正反方的观点:正方认为,刑满释放者因其自身的经历,可成为教育儿童避免犯罪的最佳人选;反方则认为警察或家长是比刑满释放者更佳的人选。然后给出自己的观点:刑满释放者并非教育儿童避免犯罪的合适人选,解决青少年犯罪这个社会问题需要多方的共同努力。最后总结全文,重申观点。
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