For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the rem

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问题 For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "Those who have the ability to be grateful are the ones who have the ability to achieve greatness. " You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案                          The Importance of Being Grateful
    [1] A Chinese saying goes, "a drop of water in need, shall be returned with a spring in deed." [2] Gratitude is one of the traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years. [3] And those who [7] endow themselves with the ability to be grateful are more likely to achieve greatness in life.
    [4] To begin with, to be grateful makes one always witness the bright side of life and perfects his personalities. Though only three fingers move flexibly, [5] Steven Hawking, the world-known physicist said that he achieved success through perseverance and a heart of gratitude. [4] Then, to be grateful can make one become a responsible citizen in the society. Once being given a meal by an old woman when he was a poor little boy, [6] Han Xin found and rewarded the old woman after he became a general, and made great contributions to the Han Dynasty. [4] More importantly, since we [7] are interdependent with others, being grateful to our parents, teachers and our friends may contribute to a peaceful world.
    [8] Therefore, being grateful, our society will be more harmonious, our family will have more happiness, and a bright future will be made.

解析 [1]引用古语:“滴水之恩,当涌泉相报”
[2]引出话题
[3]结合题目引语,引出主题
[4]从三个方面论述主题
[5]引用霍金曾答记者问的例子
[6]引用韩信回报一餐之恩的例子
[7]亮点词汇:endow themselves with“赋予”;are inter-dependent with“与……相互依赖”
[8]承接上文,总结全文
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