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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled by commenti

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled by commenti

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled by commenting on the remark "Man proposes, god disposes". You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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答案    There is a well-known proverb. "Man proposes, God disposes". It means that the planning lies with man, the outcome with heaven. The truth of it is deep and profound(提出观点段).
    Many remarkable reasons account for this argument. First of all, man’s effort is a necessity in achieving a goal. Many successful people attribute their achievement to their persistent endeavor. Furthermore, in many cases our final outcome may be influenced by chances. For example. Li Yuchun, a popular singer, becomes famous through the TV programme "Super Girls" while many other girls with singing strength are not as lucky as she. So, one’s success is decided by his effort but the outside factors also exert influenced on it.(论证观点段).
    All mentioned above tells us that it’s our endeavour that determine our destiny. It is up to ourselves whether we go ahead or backward. Therefore,we should do our best in everything we do and the successful opportunity will finally knock our doors.(总结观点段）
解析 本篇是评论性话题作文。文章要求阐述谚语“谋事在人，成事在天”(Man Proposes，God Disposes)这句话中蕴含的道理，我们首先要明确大方向：人的努力为决定因素，机遇等外部因素会起影响作用，这点不能偏差，因此应把论述的重点放在“某事在人”(Man proposes)上，即人的努力是做成一件事情的关键。很明显，本文应该是观点论证型作文。
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