Study the following graph carefully and write an essay on the topic What Jobs Do

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问题 Study the following graph carefully and write an essay on the topic What Jobs Do College Students Want to Do. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. Write you composition on the Answer Sheet.
1. 男女学生就业选择的区别。
2. 分析造成差异的原因。

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答案     The graph shows us the difference in job selection between boys and girls(l). As can be seen from the graph(2), in terms of managerial and teaching positions, there is a sharp contrast between boys and girls(3): the number of boys who become managers is 25% higher than girls, but on the other hand, the girls who become teachers are 40% higher than boys.
    In my view (4), this situation is primarily caused by two reasons. Firstly, there is a `difference between boys and girls in their personal pursuit--boys prefer challenges while girls prefer a peaceful life. Secondly, there are social factors.
    Currently, male employees take up most leading positions in companies while promotion for female employees is often difficult. At the same time, the relatively lower social status and income cause many boys to take teaching as inferior, thus few of them would like to teach (5).

解析     本题要求就图表进行描述及分析。语言要求客观、正式。另外,图表题中若给出某时间段的数字,时态也应是考生注意的问题。考生可在平时积累一些描述图表常用表达。
    1.The graph shows us...为图表类作文常用句式。开头即点出图表的内容。
    2.As can be seen from...意为“从……可看到”。
    3.There is a sharp contrast between A and B,意为A和B之间有很大差异。
    4.In one’s view意为“在某人看来”。类似表达有:in my opinion;personally speaking。
    5.注意本段中连词与副词的使用:firstly,secondly,currently,while,at the same time,thus等。这些词语的使用使文章逻辑更为清楚,也使表达更为顺畅。
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