You’ re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds

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问题     You’ re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, "Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of time." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。
2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命。
3.学生也是这样,通过刻苦学习才能成为国家有用之才。

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答案                 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
     (1) With the coming of a brand new era full of opportunities, the issue of how to succeed has aroused growing concern in public. (2) Although there are thousands of ways to success, a strong will is the important guarantee just as a proverb says, "Where there is a will, there is a way".
     (3) The long history of human being has proved that only those who have a strong will can fulfill great missions and achieve success at last. Take Mao Zedong, one of the great founders of the People’ s Republic of China, as an example. (4) Without the strong will to save Chinese people from misery and to build a (5) prosperous, democratic and civilized new country, how could he (6) drive the Japanese out of China and to become such a famous leader in the world?
     (7) If we students want to be successful in the future, the strong will of hardwork is the most important. (8) Therefore, studying hard to get more knowledge and improve our ability to handle complicated problems is the only way to lay a (9) solid foundation for future success.

解析 (1)开篇点题,指出如何成功受到广泛关注,并引出坚强的意志对于成功的重要性。
(2)使用Although转折,使上下文过渡更加自然。
(3)用一句概括性的话语引出实例。
(4)使用反问句,强调语气。
(5)三个连续的形容词更能说明实例的成功。
(6)drive…out意为“将……赶出去”。
(7)将话题引向学生,指出学生如何才能成功。
(8)最后点题,说明刻苦学习为我们未来的成功打下坚实的基础。
(9)solid foundation意为“坚实的基础”。
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