For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the followin

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Suppose your university is collecting opinions to improve the whole campus, what suggestions will you make and why?

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答案                         Opinions on Bettering Our Campus
    ①If my university now is gathering opinions on how to better our campus, ②where we will spend our most precious time , I would like to make several suggestions.
    ③First and foremost, there should be an increase in the number of classrooms equipped with an air conditioner. Hence, there is no need for students to get up at 6 o’clock just to find a seat in the library, the only building with air conditioners on campus. ④Furthermore, the university is supposed to put up several signs to warn cars to slow down, especially on the rainy days. Quite a few students complained that the running cars splashed water over them. ⑤Finally, suggestion boxes should be set up so that students can give advice anytime.
    ⑥To sum up, the university, I suppose, should take these suggestions into consideration so as to foster a harmonious atmosphere for students.

解析 ①开门见山,点明文章主题:学校征集意见来改善校园。
②使用定语从句说明大学是我们度过人生最宝贵时光的地方。
③④⑤详细列举三点建议,层次分明。
⑥对文章做出总结,希望校方采纳意见。
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