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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the foll
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the foll
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2023-06-28
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Suppose you could change one important thing about your college, what would you change? Give reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
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答案
Hoping for a Better Accommodation
I have been greatly impressed by the beautiful scenery and the rigorous academic atmosphere since I became a member of my university. If there is anything to improve, I would like to offer my suggestions about better accommodations.
It is in the dormitory that we students spend our most time on campus. It is not only the shelter for us to live in, but serves an amiable salon for roommates to consolidate bonds with each other, discussing academic issues and sharing sorrows and happiness. So comfortable accommodation is of great importance to maintain the well-being of students. But unfortunately, the accommodation in our school is far from satisfactory. It is hard to imagine that a narrow space of less than ten square meters can even accommodate eight dwellers. What’s worse, the dormitories are also poorly furnished for lack of good ventilation and air conditioning.
Comfortable accommodation can really be a boon to the all-around development for students. So I sincerely hope the problems on the part of accommodation can be given full attention and be appropriately addressed.
解析
题目要求考生对学校某方面的改进提出意见,并阐述原因,给出例证。根据题目要求,文章的结构可安排如下:
第一段:引出话题,开门见山指出个人对学校的建议。就大学生耳熟能详的住宿问题作为主题是个很好的切入点。
第二段:先分两点说明良好住宿环境的重要性;然后再陈述学校住宿的具体问题:空间狭窄且设备差。
第三段:提纲挈领地重申良好的住宿环境对学生重要性,并恳请该问题能得到改善。
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