For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the challeng

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the challenges of living in a big city. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案                    The Challenges of Living in a Big City
   It is universally known that first-tier cities in China can provide people with better infrastructure and a lager arena to develop themselves and promote strengths in work field. However, nobody can deny the fact that living in a big city is filled with challenges and hardships.
   On the one hand, dwelling in big cities means high living cost, insanely expensive housing price and serious traffic pressure. Young people are struggling with the burden of renting or purchasing a house. For example, to many Beijing drifters, a house of their own would be a dream out of reach. Even romantic relationship is a luxury for them. On the other hand, life in metropolises is fast-paced and the competition is much fiercer than small cities. Since lots of elites and dream seekers are swarming into metropolises, where there are many famous universities and corporations, the toughness far outweighs the pleasure.
   In my opinion, where to stay is totally up to us. Once we have made up our mind, we should not change our goals easily no matter how difficult the environment is.

解析     这是一篇议论文写作。这次考的话题是在大城市生活面临的挑战。题目难度不大,具有很大的开放性,考生可以根据自己在生活中的所见所闻或切实感受自由阐述观点,写作时可以采用举例论证,选择自己认为符合实际的原因来进行说明,言之有理即可。
    作文可分为三段,结构如下。
    第一段:开门见山,简单地描述一下如今在大城市生活的现状——虽然大城市生活便利,机会丰富,但是也充满了压力与挑战。为下文阐述的具体原因作好铺垫。
    第二段:根据生活实际,具体说明在大城市生活所面临的挑战。
    原因一:大城市的生活成本高、房价高、交通压力大。
    原因二:在大城市,社会精英云集,名校名企众多,生活节奏快,竞争比小城市激烈得多。
    第三段:总结全文,表明自己的观点。
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