Directions:   Write an essay of 160-200

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问题 Directions:  Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should  1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

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解析 The picture given above dramatically features a scene of college graduates choosing their future destination. When stepping out of universities, the graduates will confront with multiple choices, such as hunting a job, taking part in National Entrance Examination for MS/MA.
  The content of this picture reminds us of the crucial importance of the distinctive goal in future development, which is a practical issue faced by every would-be graduate. On the one hand, life is a one-way journey: one cannot start it all over again. Different choices in life may make great differences. On the other hand, to some extent, future is combined with choices and efforts. Some people even believe that one’s success depends more on how intelligently he chooses than on how diligently he works. But actually, with a wrong direction, the farther we go, the farther we are away from our dream.
  Therefore, positive mental guidance must be popularized among the public, especially the young to help them keep a clear mind and make wise choices in the life journey. What’s more, every youngster should realize his position and the reality and choose his life goal in a practical manner. Only with a right direction and destination can all the efforts make towards our dream pay off.

【图画解读】
  图画中传达出来的信息是对于如今的大学生来说,毕业就面临着如何抉择的问题,是进入职场和社会生活、考研继续深造、出国继续求学或是利用所学自主创业,而由于毕业时的选择对个人未来发展有重大意义,因此“选择”对于大学毕业生来说十分重要。
  该图片主题较为明确,因此其潜在含义容易挖掘,即面对毕业时的多重选择,大学生应根据自己的实际情况,慎重思考,之后根据个人取向做出符合自己情况的选择,而不能说哪个选择正确或哪个选择错误。关键是主动全面地思考,做出理性选择。
【写作要点】
  按照图画作文的写作惯例,一般可分为三部分,首先观察图画,对其内容进行描述,然后分析现象并找出其背后潜在的含义,最后就相关问题加以评论或提出解决办法。
  图画作文应注意几个问题:突出主题,文章不能跑题,而要围绕主题进行,该图画作文应围绕大学生毕业时的“选择”这一话题展开;注意文章内容布局和比例,描写时要注意不要面面俱到,而应重点突出,即图画隐含意义的分析;另外应注意避免句式单调和不应有的语法、拼写等错误。
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